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 Troubled Mien

Romanceprobato writes:

Why can't I get you off my mind is what I want to know?
Your smile in my troubled times you don't even show
I fell in love with your smile and now I can't get you out of my head




I should of known that an online relationship would only end up dead
I told you I love you and now those words have lost their meaning
I'm once again lonely and on your courage I can't stop leaning
I tried meeting you but fate closed all oppurtunities and now I'm alone
See I talk to another girl but I mistake her for you when we talk on the phone
Pictures of us being together has haunted my mind and dosen't let me sleep
How do I sleep this night when our memories make me endlessly weep
I don't know what to do and what to believe any longer so please return
All I want is an answer, do you love me or will my heart once more burn?




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Re: Troubled Mien (Score: 1)
by TnMtnGirl (tnmtngirl32@webtv.net) on Monday, January 13 @ 18:53:23 UTC
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reminds me of what I just went through,


Re: Troubled Mien (Score: 1)
by mumstheword on Thursday, February 27 @ 15:54:31 UTC
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So your online relationship failed? Bummer. Like your poem I think you should seek refuge elsewhere. Im sorry but it as awful as it gets, I could go on and on about it but that wouldn't be fair. My poem is called Become Hopeless, read it and tell me what you think cause if you think yours is better than mine than I will apologize and not write comments anymore.


 
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